Cruelty (Senryu)

by Khalid M Darwish   Jul 27, 2012


He hid the falcon
Forgot it, it got slimmer
He cried till it died

* Syllables 5/7/5

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The syllable count isn't 3-5-3. I counted 5-4-3

    Lovely message though. I like it; ambiguous and thought-provoking.

    Keep writing