I Tried, Really i did
I sacrificed everything and not once did i quit
I devoted my whole life to you, there was no compromise
But now i realise that is the exact for my demise
You cant save me now
Its time for me to leave
Forget the cowards exit i will die a hero
Because the amount by which i feel loved and cared for is equal to zero
So i continue my march through the valley of death
Forgive me for being so cliche but i have nothing left
God forgive me, for i am about to sin
I look to the top of the hill, yeah i wont win
Great write!
I like the flow you have created.
Your great sense of word selection has really made this poem a great read as you have truly put forth your emotions that you feel deeply!
a 5/5 from me!
Keep it up!