by Khalid M Darwish Aug 19, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
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An atom in a |
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This piece is actually quite sad. |
by Baby Rainbow
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Aww, this is actually quite a sad poem from you because in this one it stands out that you feel so small and unoticed int his world, and you used this atom to explain that in your poem. Nice job with this. |
by Chelsey
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Khalid, very awesome haiku!! I love the use of atom instead of person or body. Words like that make haikus so interesting! :) I love your last line, a simple statement gave this little poem such strength! |
by Wild flower
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Do I have to answer the title? |