Live to work (Etheree)

by Khalid M Darwish   Aug 31, 2012


Live
to give
and forgive
be attractive
While using your sieve
choose those who are active
never those who are passive
Always be cooperative
You exist in the earth to outlive
But there will be a rest life to relive

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  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    Good one, good flow, great message and seems an effortless one..!!
    nice;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I really like the flow of the poem except i found that the last line did go out of the flow but appart from that it was a great emotive read!

  • 13 years ago

    by Darren

    A good etheree however I am not sure where the acrostic part comes in unless you are refering to every line ending with an 'E'

    the syllable count is spot on, and there are some strong messages in this.
    My only nit is the final line seems to stumble a bit.

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