Sensitive

by Thomas   Sep 9, 2012


It's not easy
being a sensitive man
trying to be balanced
whenever I can

All because people keep throwing
sharp objects my way
I must pull up defenses
to keep these pirates at bay

So that these things don't stick
and infect my sanity
soil my fragile personality
reduce my visions clarity

Like a straw house
I can collapse
No need for the bad wolf
or a big puff

Please help me strengthen
my very foundation
So I can survive the days
without everyones consolation

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  • 13 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Wow... I was blow away...by such blunt truth...i think it nice that your are senative...i dont see that alot..it refreashing:).....great poem:)

  • 13 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    My fav lines...
    "Please help me strengthen
    my very foundation

    So I can survive the days
    without everyones consolation"
    A very true & honest poem...
    Good piece!

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Here it is, d best part of ur poem.

    So that these things don't stick
    and infect my sanity
    soil my fragile personality
    reduce my visions clarity

    Like a straw house
    I can collapse..

    Gud ,thomas..

  • 13 years ago

    by Alanis

    A well written piece with. Important values

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Dude this is an awesome write :-)))

    Being a sensitive guy is harder than what people think eh? I know that one well, a great man once told me ' to be a good man you must be caring and passionate but never weak' i have to say i think thats a good analogy. And thomas you are all these things even if you dont see it, the rest of us do :-)

    5/5 all day long my friend :-)

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