Hidden Tear

by Maple Tree   Sep 9, 2012


If I write of the sadness

that imprisons a thirsty

tear, forbidden to fall;

then I will have to stop

writing forever, for that

silent dew drop is the

only thing keeping me

alive....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Another one from you which is filled with sadness but expressed in such a talented way.

    never stop writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    This is heart breaking andrea
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Thomas

    I don't think that sadness can stop you from writing since you are a fountain of inspiration.

    Very good write here Maple, keep it up ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwww this holds a huge amount of sadness, it touched me. Every poem written has a story behind it, this one has a tragedy behinds it.

    Perfectly written, great job<3

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is amazing. I mean for it being so short and defiantly seemingly simple it has so much emotion. So much heartrending emotion. The descriptions are absolutely stunning. Your words are so average, yet they hold so much power, it is almost unbelievable. I love how clear the tone of the piece is. The strength of the voice behind the words is also an amazing skill that seems mastered in this piece.

    5/5 wonderful job.

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