Memoirs of Gloom

I really relate to this poem, i think we all go through troubles or tribulations in life and your vivid description was amazing but what i lied the most were the uplifting words towards the end of the piece, amazing as usual

I get this idea of being desperate and powerless and hopeless. But sometimes, we can see the brighter side of pain, that we gain hope once again.

I rippled like a stone in the pond,
sinking me open to hope.

^ This simile is creatively penned, almost like the crux of your idea. Lovely write, Yakori!

Excellent... I just loved the clever descriptions and the thoughtfulness. also the flow is good and the poem needs deep thought to know the skin of this... Beautifully written:)

Yakori, this is amazing!! Loved the nature in this piece. I often find no matter the topic, adding nature metpahors seem to make a poem totally beautiful.

I love what you're saying here. Sometimes we go througn trials in life. Get blinded, feel defeated, exhausted, but in the end, sometimes its just a blessing in disguise and something that needs to happen.

Awesome poem, awesome message. Loved this!

This poem is very well written again i will say punctuation is not necessary.

Lush pain deafened my thoughts,

its very good line. you used the first word very strongly. good work friend