A dialog with a bird

by Khalid M Darwish   Oct 16, 2012


I am like you, my bird of grief,
with no country, just my belief

I've what enchants a child at night,
alienation and joys of light

I've got no place or space to roam,
since only your eyes are my home

From a past age, lost in the time,
I'm back with a song and a rhyme

Its sound cries for a happiness,
between the roses and weakness

My dream, yesterday I'd a big
bird visiting me on a twig

What an illusion you've lived in,
were you in mind or not within!

* Each line is 8 syllables

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    The bird has no home other than those eyes.
    wanting to fly but the only place where the bird can land are those precious eyes.

    I got a bit confuse with the bird.. rather with this sentence

    My dream, yesterday I'd a big
    bird visiting me on a twig..

    if you are going to be the bird how can you visit you on the twig.. that question went throw my mind when I read it.

    Other than that sentences, I think everything else is good, I didn't count the syllables but I'm guessing you checked them with the site so they should be okay.
    5/5

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