Sight of Death

by Robert   Oct 20, 2012


Through the dark valleys of death
The rosary of blood, Eyes of black
Here the darkness knows no rest
For all is calm, the sun is set

The moon lit bright, with the clouds fluorescent glow
Shined down upon the scarlet rose
Almost vibrant, yet suttle beneath
The graves forboding gleams of grief

In the shadows of the night
Rose the man in black, with smiling delight
Patiently watching the sands of time
For all is brittle, not worth the tries

He comes and goes as he pleases
For all is nigh upon his presence
For in his hands is the scarlet rose
When all is lost, and never more

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  • 13 years ago

    by XXthe mistakeXX

    Amazing!!!!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    The vision of death, is most definitely unforgettable, well done. I enjoyed the subtle rhymes.

    I only have a suggestion though-

    "The moon lit bright, with the clouds flourescent glow"
    ^^
    I think you should shorten this line a tad, to improve the flow a bit. Something like " The moon lit bright with clouds eerie glow..etc.
    Also I think you meant "fluorescent".

    Other than that I quite enjoyed the piece.

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