Very noble, very touching, very dark. im starting to notice an insidiously delicious pattern with how you write. you mightve earned a place on my favorite poets list. this poem was good, like your others. an enjoyable read that was over almost too quickly. keep writing.
Thank you, TSI25. Your comments are very gratifying to read. What an honor to be possibly chosen to be on your favorite poets list.
8 years ago
Beautifully written I love this heart touching piece. I just feel a need to say you're a good writer and this poem makes me think of my friend just the thought of him gives me chills. Another great write...
Thank you FallenFromGraceByMyChoice, it means a lot that you think this is beautiful and that one day you would want to read this to your daughter.
Thanks Autuumnbree, you are very sweet. Thinking of past loved ones tends to give me chills or completely breaks me down, especially him...
8 years ago
by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye
Awwww this poem is sooo beautiful i just love it it says of the heartbreak and the dreams that you just want to hold dear to your heart! that pain is what i wanted on my own poem and you know i needed a little more pain but this poem is so beautiful with the imagery and the emotions sweetie this is a good poem that i want to read this poem to my daughter one day when she marries lol! :)5/5