The New Opium (Haibun)

by Larry Chamberlin   Nov 11, 2012


The poppy fields of West India and Burma provided England fodder for opium dens in China. The Qing emperor lost the war to keep it out and gave Britain a nearly empty scrabbly island in the South China Sea as compensation. When the sun waves goodbye for the year, winds trap air in the north cradle of that island where millions live in a tiny crescent lodged between the harbour and mountains behind. It appears as if all the opium smoke in China has come to repose there with the haute couture of ex pats where nothing happens without popping a cork.

Victoria Peak
reveals Hong Kong smog obscured
drowning in white wine.

NOTE: Haibun is a form poetry comprising of a prose travel piece followed by a related haiku. The travel piece is restricted similarly to the haiku: the invisible observer, reflective of nature and seasonally set, sensual and with a change-up, not so much of an "aha" as the haiku, but a change of direction giving greater reflection or perspective.
The haiku provides a new meaning to the prose piece. it might be referred to as the saucer where the prose is the teacup which settles into place.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Just as I comment on Khalids, I find where he found his idea from,

    this is awesome Larry, a great combination that works well, it just shows how a haiku can say as much as a piece of prose.
    It's also satisfying for those who enjoy writing prose as well as poetry,
    (is there a senryu version? a piece of prose about life followed by a senryu)
    As I like to have a play around with forms I will have to give this a shot myself.

    Nice piece.

    • 11 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      The Haibun form was popularized by Matsuo Basho who primarily used it for travel accounts. However, I see no reason the format could not be used with Senryu or perhaps even Tanka.
      Unless, that is, you are dealing with a purist. There are contests & online associations for Haibun literature. But, I say experiment.

  • 11 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Great poem Larry! This is rather a strange form of poetry... but in a good way! I like the travel pose of this poem... it was so clear and well-written... and then the haiku was great!

    And thanks I think I understand the form better now... I'll give it a try! ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Really nice Larry! I hope to make a similar trial like this. This is really challenging.
    Great write

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