Your Logical Song

by Karla   Nov 20, 2012


There is a man behind a logical shadow,
his sleepy ego wants a war
but his battle is over and his lord is dead.

Tell him we don't serve the same god.
Tell him to grasp the last opportunity
to become (im)mortal.

Karla Bardanza
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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Oh yes! I agree too.

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    I find this to be really smart ;)

    and.. enjoyable at the same time!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    When I was young it seems that life was so wonderful a miricle ohh it was beautiful magical .

    Lol

    This is such an interesting poem so much
    Power for so little words, awesome :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Amazing piece Karla.... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen

    Writing a powerful short poem is difficult, in fact, extremely difficult, but you nailed it.

    :)

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