Over all it was amazing the detail of the blissful love blew my mind. I had to ask myself how could anything so good go wrong.
I get lost cause there is no detail of why he left although maybe obvious for others. Im just saying for those that dont know maybe an insight.

The symbolism behind dove and the situation match perfectly. Although i get lost on glove.

My favorite part was the line at the beginning, "I taste the bittersweet taste of a one more of these retched cigars," It made me smile.

Beautifuly written fine details and the flow of the wording is nice.

Very sweet and tender write, there's many stanzas that sticks out but I really like....

As time was passing by,
Each day that passed I knew I would never cry,
Because we were in that blissful high,
Together underneath the midnight sky.

This stanza in particular that is so romantic and the descriptions you give is in this write is amazing.

Keep writing...5/5

I love this. It is so sweet but yet I cried reading it. This is wonderful.

Awwwww, that is soooo sweet, I hope you make a sequel :)I really liked the story you told, how it was not just \a whole punch of words throw together, it was a story, and has so much meaning!

It's truly amazing momma :) I just did I didn't know the backstory. Tell donia I know her pain and if se needs to talk just ask. :)
Anyways it flowed eloquently, truly a marvel. 5/5

Lovely and sweet. I love the magic in your words. Your writes are unique:)

This is really sweet!
i will of course read more from you!
^_^

Nice

I loved the style of rhyming in this poem as every 4 lines together, so enticing. The flow is great. It's a great poem as inspired from your friend Donia.

Great piece

Sounds like he is a member of the Meoff family I.E-rip. rat,get,front etc. get? how silly or maybe jack was his last name I.E.-pallet , bumper, car etc. c-ya