Bases of success [Tanka]

For the trees change leaves not roots

oh, then this line needs some comma

For the trees change leaves, not roots.

Wow khalid..wat a strong msg..
Specially, d last line is d root of uor poem.

I think this piece needs some editing... I am not sure what it means. The idea sounds kind of force.

My thoughts however are that if a tree is move to another location it leaves no roots... but i think they do...

so if one dreams are not according to reality or not possible to reach... then one should change them.. but I don't understand how is that related to the tree... if one changes the dreams the dreams will still remain with us.. they might not be our top priority.. but just as when a tree is moved to another location.. sometimes some roots are left behind.. and other times the tree dies if it was move to another location... So I guess that's what you wanted to say, that if we move to our dreams to something reachable then the other ones will die... or may be not.

I think this piece needs some editing... I am not sure what it means. The idea sounds kind of force.

My thoughts however are that if a tree is move to another location it leaves no roots... but i think they do...

so if one dreams are not according to reality or not possible to reach... then one should change them.. but I don't understand how is that related to the tree... if one changes the dreams the dreams will still remain with us.. they might not be our top priority.. but just as when a tree is moved to another location.. sometimes some roots are left behind.. and other times the tree dies if it was move to another location... So I guess that's what you wanted to say, that if we move to our dreams to something reachable then the other ones will die... or may be not.