Would you care
by Kelwin lost in thought Jan 15, 2013
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13 years ago
by Bryanna
Very good.. i know exactly what ya mean
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13 years ago
by Kate
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.
I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.
The last line, you should take out the "so". -
13 years ago
by Kate
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.
I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.
The last line, you should take out the "so".
