Which way will you choose? [Double Senryu]

by Khalid M Darwish   Jan 19, 2013


Somebody told me -
offer him another chance
you will lose nothing

Another told me -
Don't give another bullet
He missed you first time

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I read this piece sometime ago but didn't comment. The funny thing was that I was writing a poem about second chances but after reading this piece I didn't feel the need to finish it. Trust once, trust twice but not with all your heart.

    Then sadly, giving second chances is not considering trusting someone. . . Really good poem. I could go on and on but it will only be personal. It really makes me think and feel.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This reminds me of the saying "forgive and forget." When someone has done you wrong, I think it's smart to bring a little protection with you, the second time around.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Interesting piece again, We sometimes say everyone deserves a second chance but when it comes down to certain situations we question wheteher this still applies or not. The decision of this path will change our lives because we may end up thankful for giving them a second chance, or be heart broken with regret that we gave them the second chance. Nice job

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Ahh, I like this. I believe that everyone deserves a second chance, sometimes it's smart to strap on a bullet proof vest though.