Illusion [Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Feb 14, 2013


Illusion keeps our
existence, leaves us live some
of our past silence
and puts its magic lotion
on our pains where they cool down

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really like this one, it has a deeper meaning to it that some people will choose to ignore while others will accept as it is a fact of life.

    REally enjoyed this one. the title drew me in.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Really liked it! and yes illusions do keep our existence trust me if i didn't know what this poem was about i would still love it! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin