A Time for a United World [String Senryus]

by Khalid M Darwish   Feb 20, 2013


We people build walls,
each around their continent
but built no bridges

That's a good reason
we're always isolated
with no relation

We forgot the fact that
our parents Adam and Eve
had one origin

we're like one body
but in best creation and
cohesive bindings

Unfortunately,
distinction and disperse was
the end point we reached

We hate each other
in the name of religion
color and power

I have a question
Will you be enjoyed to see
another world war?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    We hate each other
    in the name of religion
    color and power
    ^^Yes, I agree this lines and I think the humanity is died but the fake humans are alive with the name of humans.we are hating each other with this three reasons.So this is also a world far between humans versus humanity. You shared the fact with your style.
    good poem my friend..

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    We people build walls,
    each around their continent
    but built no bridges

    ^^ I think this line "we people.." needs a comma like "we, people, build walls" I can be wrong though.

    There are other parts where I think should be present tense instead of past. For instance "we forgot" I think it should be like "we forget.."

    Other than that I enjoyed the read and unfortunately those walls we have don't let us come out.

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