Interview with a Vampire...(Reversed Haynaku)

by ah satan 666   Feb 24, 2013


Warm to the
throat, I
drink...

like raspberry liquor,
Yet; human
bottle.

A frenzy begins,
heart beats
irregular.

Drained of life,
Your body
falls...

taking your breath,
murdered my
suffering.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I have never seen the film, so I have no idea what it is about but I think your poem would make me interested if you made this a film!

    your wording is short, choppy, and fast and creates an image of darkness, blood and death all in a few seconds.

    Very powerful poem, well written. xx

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Interview with a Vampire is my favourite vampire film... it is a must watch at least once... I like the elegance to it, the dark twists to playing with death and the need for one to feed, yet hold on to your soul.

      Thank you missy xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well this needs to be highlighted... Darn it!! What a deep and dark elegance this is Natasha!!

    You took the moment and placed it in a unique form.... Oh this is wonderful!!

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      I have a thing for forms now thanks to you,.. and dark poetry I adore... I have a dark nature write in mind but it's got your name all over it as well :D xx