Control

by yogi73   Feb 26, 2013


So says it
as it takes control

It questions not
it has authority

It will be many things in the beginning
it will be only a thing in the end

The undertaking will be fought and won
who will be the victor

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    The undertaking will be fought and won
    who will be the victor

    ^^ The victor will be the one in control. haha
    nice piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hmmm..interesting topic here you have penned with few words yet stress its importance.

    It questions not
    it has authority

    ^^Very true. When you look at it those with authority are the ones who control to get results!

    It will be many things in the beginning
    it will be only a thing in the end

    ^^I really like these lines. It will be indeed many things and once all is done and has happened it will only be one thing, "control".

    The undertaking will be fought and won
    who will be the victor

    ^^A very good ending! No one will know the outcome whether it is the controller or the ones rising against the controller wins. Excellent! Liked the read :)

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