The grudge she holds...

by Amreen   Mar 20, 2013


Another life she killed
with the hell which resides
in her naive soul.

Her lifeless heart feels content
for succumbing another hunt
to her deep desire of death.
Yet she owns a tint of restlessness
as she waits for her future prey.

The Hilton's are terrified again
another baby- their future heir
dies unborn.
This makes them restless and worried
for they own no heir to carry forward
their 8 - generation legacy.

She enjoys their melancholy
her tender eyes show her joy.
Yet the cup of her grudge seems unfilled,
as she aims at dwindling Hilton's existence and their name;
just like they did of her's.

She was a part of their history
a baby to be born in their family
but they wanted a son,
and when they realized her gender
they killed her before she could see the world.

They left her to die in the void of loneliness.
And her grief made her a dead soul,
to find solace
with the last breath of her grudge-
the end of Hilton's existence.

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  • 12 years ago

    by TSI25

    This had a pretty fascinating psychological effect on me

    i was reading and cognitively aware of the words of the poem but in my head the morphed seamlessly into a story, completely with a euphoric, bittersweet high, soul crushing lows, and all the gritty middles.

    i could see every part, imagine the noble family discussing what must be done before harshly executing their plans...

    this is a very vivid poem, and a very dark one. while them oral of the story is not as straightforward as one might usually expect, its made up for in that this isnt a 'kids tv show' plot. this is a story with horrific depth, and layers that really make you wonder about mankind

    well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Aww this is really heartbreaking :( reading through it I felt a sadness, You wrote this out really well, its poetic and tells a story. . a sad one at that.

    Its just so sad to hear about babies not being born for whatever reason. . . it both makes me sad and mad. . every precious heart should be able to have the chance at life. . .

    Good writing here Amreen :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lillie

    Wow what a dark poem, well written for sure, dark but very well written 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Another life she killed
    with the hell which resides
    in her naive soul.

    ^^^^ this one got my heart in a knot... this was me once... i had no idea what i had in my heart but i guess i do now!!!

    Her lifeless heart feels content
    for succumbing another hunt
    to her deep desire of death.
    Yet she owns a tint of restlessness
    as she waits for her future prey
    ^^^^
    this part is WOW to me i swear you make the best dark lol :) and i'm good in dark poetry lol :) 5/5

    nothing was wrong with this piece this is just WOW
    Queen Ashlin

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    "Another life she killed
    with the hell which resides
    in her naive soul.

    Her lifeless heart feels content
    for succumbing another hunt
    to her deep desire of death.
    Yet she owns a tint of restlessness
    as she waits for her future prey."

    Your opening stanza is a good one. It made me want to know why she would kill another life. In the second stanza, I could picture her like a tiger lurking around trying to capture its prey unawares. Good imagery.

    Hmm...what a tragedy. From the third stanza it felt totally different. 5/5

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