Web of Lies (Shadorma)

The imagery in this write is quite clear.A good job indeed.

Ewwwww.... yukky!

Very very powerful poem, you have definitely mastered this form and capturing the short powerful imgae in the few lines.

This to me represents power and control of an abuser over their victim. The web is the emotional distress and torture that keeps the victim there, the fear that stops them from being able to move. Trapped.

Very nicely worded!

Thanks for the awesome comments, people :)

Sweet in a spidery kind of way. You nailed this one. Great job.

Perfect piece!