Confusion...

by LoveableKirsty   Apr 10, 2013


Tangled up in this world of mine, these strings called "Life" has left me intertwined

My thoughts often exhale from my mind as if they were the lungs of a tired runner left behind

Confusion sets in like the sunrise of dawn but at dust it just becomes another sleepless night that makes me yawn...

Food has become a mere option not a priority
But this dreadful confusion made itself my seniority...

Unable to think, sleep or eat just leaves me wih this confusion that I can not beat

How did I ever become so confused?

What has led me to this unsolvable muse?

-LoveableKirsty

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  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Love the format of this poem.
    The usage of wording was effective and deep.
    I like the battle inside of you and how you explained it; you did a good job here.
    You may want to go back and fix "with" for this stanza below..

    Unable to think, sleep or eat just leaves me wih this confusion that I can not beat

    As you can see it's wih instead of with. Anyways keep up the good work.
    5/5

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