Inside...

by LoveableKirsty   Sep 24, 2012


Inside this body of mine...

A dark and gloomy storm is brewing ready to wage war and reck havoc on my fragile strings of emotions...

They cry out melodies of sorrow and anguish, desperatly seeking a listening ear...

What once was a blossoming valley of refuge has now become a place in which I despise...

Inside these memories of mine....

Craddles the pain of desolation which makes me billow over and weep as if I am a weeping willow swaying in the turbulent winds of a tempest...

Inside this mind of mine...

Was once like a place of compassion and consolation,
A place in which I admired and longed for...

But now it is a fridged lonely destitude cave that is unwelcoming to thoughts of life...

I cry out for help perpetuously, but my lips are sealed shut as if they were stone and my quivering cries for help go unheard yet again...

Inside these eyes of mine beholds beautiful faces that lift up my spirits...

Now my eyes are in a constant battle to withhold my tears of pain...

Oh how I wish I could just pour out all of this affliction and contension that has created such a vicious void in my forlorn heart of mine...

~LoveableKirsty

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  • 11 years ago

    by Nick C

    Your really quite good Kirsty :) Tickles chin o- x

  • 11 years ago

    by Suceel Rose

    I was searching for s'th more than just 5... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Blew me away! What a great write and powerful job, the emotions in this piece are real and very expressive. I was easily able to feel what you have spelled out here. The one part which really got me was.
    "Craddles the pain of desolation which makes me billow over and weep as if I am a weeping willow swaying in the turbulent winds of a tempest..."
    That says it all, I'm sure we have all felt that way, felt like there is no hope and the light will never return. It's such a dark and sad feeling, you really captured it in such amazement and heartache.
    Stay strong, keep your head up. Thanks for commenting on mine.
    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by LoveableKirsty

      Aww well thank you soo much, I love being descriptive and using illustrations to convey my emotions...

  • 11 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    Wow this poem blew me away by the powerful emotions seeping out of every line. I feel the anger seeking to be released as it feels so prisoned inside your mind. I feel the sadness cursing through, needing a hopeful light to carry you through.

    You have gripped me by the metaphors embedded in this piece such as the tears of pain that are released.

    This poem was such a great read, hope you never have to face times like this again
    5.5 from me

    • 11 years ago

      by LoveableKirsty

      Thank you soo much... I am glad that you liked it and felt how I felt...

  • 11 years ago

    by Lyndy

    This is so filled with emotion..that feeling of battling against yourself and the struggles that we go through..
    I hope you can get over this and start anew..never lose hope and have faith..don't torture yourself too much, okay?

    • 11 years ago

      by LoveableKirsty

      Thank you so much, this was just a dark time in my life...

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