Busy Bees

by ah satan 666 & Wild Flower   Apr 11, 2013


Like sun rays...
through detailed stain glass windows,
wings shimmer like silk...
reflecting a kaleidoscope of colour.

~ Restless ~

Up ahead wild roses...
daffodils and daisies boarder the roadside
but they seek the buttery cups,
beyond the floral verge, a vast field that's fuller.

~ Ecstatic ~

Settled upon a comfy bed,
to accumulate their needs.
Amongst the waxed gold petals...
they secure pom pom velvet beads.

~ Elegant, yet swift ~

A dramatic dance displayed,
from one cup to another.
For the call has been made,
through whispered winds of nature... its mother.

~ My children, once again its time blossom ~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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  • 10 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Okay. You are a master at nature poetry, and you should definitely right more, like right now. This is gorgeous, you guys.

    This piece is so vibrant. It's not like all the very chill, gentle nature poems. This is so bright and colorful and vivid. Just gorgeous! I want to see another collab between the two of you, soon.

    Natasha, you get a pen and start writing nature poetry right this minute, lady! I demand it! ;) This is amazing!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Why I love this nature poem:

    I decided to come back and go into detail on this poem, I'm sure you ladies won't mind.

    Nature is beautiful, and to read a nature poem, you need to feel the beauty, you gals made me feel this piece.

    The stanzas, crafted with ~lines~ as a break was brilliant. I also admire the title, "Busy Bees" its cute, vibrant and fun!

    the first stanza brings color alive in true brilliance with your word usage!

    2nd and 3rd stanzas take me to fields of excited flowers... and "Pom Pom beads" OH BE STILL MY HIPPY HEART <3

    to captured the beautiful of a flower with that wording is wonderful!

    Referring to nature as Mother.. well I melted of course and then the last line... made me sigh...

    ~ My children, once again its time blossom ~

    ^^^ BEAUTIFUL

    this poem is going into my favorites!

  • 10 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    Thank you so much Maple <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    OH MY GOODNESS! I could kick myself for missing this piece... but I see date of submission and that is the day I lost my best friend, so I am here now...

    YOU TWO created a beautiful nature piece!! just beautiful! sighs.. ladies your pens are awesome together!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    Its an honor writing with you:)
    Thank you!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      That's how I feel about it missy, so Thank you Flower Girl <3

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