A Lie in Reality [Double Tanka]

Oooh thats so true, after a lie its difficult to trust that person the same way, and also sometimes we'll see them differently.
Love this piece:)

So true .. It's not the lie its the consequences that follow that break the bond

An unbelievably true write, Khalid! Lies aren't worth the trust that could be forever broken. Truth is always the key to any relationship to thrive.

I love the ending line, it's unique and really stands out.

Awh this one is really wow!! it made me want to cry since i'm not the saint others would love me to be i can say i tell the truth but in reality i don't at times i LOVE the first stanza cause thta's the one that my heart bleed to read it really got the my heart going! and it's true what a lie can do to any relationship...5/5

Queen Ashlin

Very thought provoking. i felt a kind of depth in the last couple lines

"seems so boring, coming
slow and hardly getting dressed.."

and it really made me think about the aptness of that metaphor; somehow it just seems... correct though i cant really think of any other way to state it.

over all a very short, very powerful piece about the dangers of lying, especially to those you lie about. a lie can be a low acting poison that will tear people apart - even long after the lie has become irrelevant.