Another Land

by TSI25   Apr 29, 2013


Another man
journeyed to another land,
a land quite far away
and met a dream.

Her Eyes

were stars piercing through
icy glaciers,

but warm and sweet as the bluebells
that fill up boundless fields;
like oceans fit to burst -
dancing with the breeze
through the hearts of angels.

She would speak in such
melodious perfection,
and she would look at him

and Smile.

The smile of a dream...
how it defies description
even now... there are no words
in the tongues of man
to express the adoration
kindled by her smile.

Adoration still aflame
in his tiny.
Charring.
Heart.

He still thinks of her daily.
He thinks of her starry eyes,
and how her smile filled him
to the brim with hope
of seeing it once more.

She forged him into
something different than a man.
In the fires of his happiness,
from the steel of his adoration,
into something new -
and lonely without her.

I miss her.

and if you're reading this...

I love you.
(I've only ever loved you.)

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  • 10 years ago

    by butterflyqueen

    There is something in your wiords that makes me feel that this piece is amazing it is purely you and your soul. Finaklly i understand that feeling whe writing,

    I love this piece, it is sweet and heartfelt. It reminds me of the way I feel about someone now, the only thing is that they do not know and they do not want to know. They refuse to understand the depths of my heart for them. Here it seems in a way I can relate to the way he is to me. His eyes are brown and his hair is dark, but your descriptions are still amazing about one person be so important to you. I love this poem, it is so heartfelt, so beautiful, so detailed. I hope the person its for, found their way here and finally understoond. You really were in love and you really were perfect abnout this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Good write. I like the line, "through the hearts of angels." The best. I've written a lot about hearts and Angels but never put the two together. seemed like it got a little hopeless at the end. All in all good write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I like the sequencial arrangement of prepositions in the last stanza:

    She forged him into
    something different than a man.
    In the fires of his happiness,
    from the steel of his adoration,
    into something new -
    and lonely without her.

    and even the word choice like "fires", "steel".
    You rocked it here.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice
    I like it. It remembers me something.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice
    I like it. It remembers me something.

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