Non-eclipsing (Senryu)

by Meme   May 16, 2013


Every sunrise holds
a different memory
of you in my mind.

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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  • 6 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww meme, this is so adorable and touching. so very sweet and says exactly enough, not too much and not too little, it is a perfect little glimpse of a thought, a moment in time which is what these poems are all about.

    Really like this and it is things like this that should be put in little greetings cards.

    Nice work and very creative title xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love watching the sun rise, it gives hope of a new beginning, and in that moment, the day starts perfectly...and I always find myself thinking of the previous day, or reminscing about something past.

    This is so beautiful, and simple but so much can be said in senryu's, and this is no exception.

    :) x

    • 6 years ago

      by Meme

      My favorite time of the day is sunrise. Watching it is like taking a new breath :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Oh, this touches my heart so much! It's amazing how much a few simple words can trigger memories... just like how a different sunrise can. BEAUTIFUL!!!! Adding to my favorites! <3

    • 6 years ago

      by Meme

      Its my favorite time of the day!
      Thanks hon :)