Broken Heart

Straight to the point

Beautiful work!

~Nice opening:
Each drop of tears I wipe
Each stone of your memory I broke

Compelling words and imagery.
Really short, looking/wanting to read more.

I think this is a short but a well written poem :)

I'm happy you made the changes..it reads well
now. Memories are hard to erase not even tears
can help the pain..touching write.