Satoric Feast

Judging comment:

I'm finding it slightly difficult to put my words into thoughts here, because emotionally this strikes a nerve and it strikes it hard. I've been re-reading this over and over and each time the emotion and sadness present wounds me a little more.

The raw feeling of emptiness the author describes is ever present from start to finish and all too easy to relate to for those that have been through difficult times. At first, I thought the narrator was the ghost of someone that had passed away, as I believe everything mentioned could easily by felt by someone mourning a loved ones loss, though now I'm not so sure, but this is what I love about poetry: so often we are free to interpret how we wish, even if our thoughts don't match what the author intended originally.

Whether my initial reckoning was correct or incorrect, I believe this is beautiful poetry and this author is becoming a fast favourite of mine.

A timeless Piece.I admire your presentation of words.

No problem darling! I loved that poem, and I was so happy it won :)

Congrats on the win :)

Such a poem of depth and thought when you introduce this state of enlightenment. Congrats on the win!!