Life's Garden

This is a very beautiful poem that holds a lot of meaning. I didn't see anything to criticize so here is what I think.

First stanza- I like the first couple lines you say. Do tears really make you weak though?. I like how you portray this character though. I think what you are saying that this person is a hero to a lot of people and now they feel too weak to do anything. Emotions are hard to deal with sometimes yes but I like how you word this. Just another opponent... we are in a battle with life and staying strong is hard I agree. Great opening stanza it really pulls you in.

Second- Wow this stanza is great so filled with courage and imagery. Everyone has hidden strength inside of them so the use of lion is perfect. The lion has so much courage inside of them. Maybe you are saying that the lion is your heart. that's where the emotions come from. Great stanza.

Ending- I like this ending as well. The message is very simple. We have to tend to our own lives and if we don't we will die. The garder is a great word for life. End up up top I think you mean we will always end up happy. Great poem overall. As the wording and flow sre just great! :)

Awesome poem.