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Everlasting made me cry with this one.
She has a gift of word crafting that leaves me very emotional and I was in awe of this piece.

Death is a natural part of life and yet a painful time in a persons life. I was amazed at how she captured that moment of looking at a loved one in a coffin- "your eyes will be two coffins in the cemetery"
The angle I took is how explosive it can be to look and see a loved one in a coffin.. very painful. That is one angle I took with this poem and then I twisted my thoughts to possibly making a message to someone who has mistreated someone and how they might feel after others has passed on... It was yet another poem by this author that left me speechless! I love her play on words here.. just love this piece!!

Nice dark poem love it

Loved the dark feel to this poem, liked it a lot

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I would like to dive into the depths of this deep sentimental write but am afraid I will do injustice to it!

There is so much rolling inside my mind for with each line, images are just so alive and pulling. A soulful write.