You're Free

A beautiful poem with such a tragic subject.
Death I assume is what we are talking about here, or so I took it.
I love the rhyming sequences here they were pieced together well and you write so good with much emotion, keep it up.

Loved it the reader can sympathize with the main person in the poem and I think every one has had this experience before I know I have well penned my dear 5/5 from me

-Onyx

It's fun to read this piece, it has a beat that makes me smile instead of frown and that to me it's iambic, ain't I right? though, I must say this piece is sad because the content is sad. The narrator let her go and now, she is where she belongs, in the arms of her beloved.

Loved it

Nice tight little poem with a good rhyme scheme.

my only nit is 'your' should be 'you're'

in both the title and the second from last line.

otherwise nice little write.