Leaving you

by Saerelune   Mar 8, 2014


It's like turning off the hot shower
just when its warmth has bribed my skin:
there's not enough steam to cover the loss,
and drops of water trickle endlessly,
reminding me, how I'm naked
like a newborn, opening my eyes
for the first time away from you.

8-3-2014
5:07 PM

    report violation
1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    What a beautiful poem this is by the Huntress!
    It's a touching and sad, heartfelt piece about letting go and moving on, wrapped with a unique twist on the emotions of leaving. The descriptive word usage is absolutely divine. Love the metaphor of the shower. This poem leaves me speechless.
    Small poetry at its finest!

  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Good job here sad but well written my friend =)

More Poems By Saerelune