The knife

by Misundertood   Apr 1, 2014


I know the knife
and the knife knows me
a lot of times
i think its meant to be

every time it comes to me
the knife and me
are meant to be

it slides across
my wrists are bare
I take a small gasp of air
nobody looks
nobody cares

so again i gasp for air
I know the knife
the knife knows me
all the time
I know its meant to be

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  • 11 years ago

    by Smaccams

    Check the rhyming a bit on this one too! You've got your end rhymes spot on, but again, the structure is a bit loose; try to make it constant! :)

    But the message, and more importantly, your feelings were conveyed greatly. From this one could imagine how much pain they must be in to have become acquainted with such a dangerous object, as well as how they might feel rather lonely due to them stating that the static object and them self supposedly spends quite a lot of time with one another.

    If you're ever feeling down; feel welcome to send a few words or so to me!

    • 11 years ago

      by Misundertood

      Thanks you've been a good friend and i will remember that

  • 11 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    *hides knife* Nope

  • 11 years ago

    by misty lott

    Wow so i guess im not the only one with horror

  • 11 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    Wow this is really beautiful o far, 100/100

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