370

by Ray Blue   Apr 24, 2014


Haiku #3

Chasing paper planes
Coaxes five-leaf clover
Pray for the lost souls.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Beautiful poem

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Hi Mohan,
      Appreciate the wonderful comment.
      Thanks much.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    I can not getting the meaning of second line

    Coaxes five-leaf clover

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Hi Jyoti,
      Thanks again.
      Western culture a five leaf clover means, your lucky to find it. Flight 370 search is still on going. Its like finding a five leaf clover-which seems impossible. It might take years but hopefully, the plane will be found. Many families are awaiting for the result of the search, looking for their loveones.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    All I can think of here is the lost lives of 370 people and children. The opening line brought images of happy children playing with the planes and then their lives cut short. Touching.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you Meena. All we can do is pray for.

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