An eerie

by Meme   Jun 4, 2014


I got so addicted to the nostalgia
so I traced back the memories to
when we first fall in love, i expected
the butterflies to hatch within me
but there was nothing..

..just the fading sounds of our yesterdays.

That was the point when I stopped
holding on. So take a step to rampage
away from this love, it is not meant
to imprison you.

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Your presence lingered in my heart
long after you were gone. And just
like you, I once was hurting too,
but I choose him over the heartache.
Loving him was not a reconciliation
after us; it was a gift I never thought
I deserved after abandoning love.

Because of you I learned to remember!

I can only wish for you to celebrate
the memories into something new,
to find the closure in a new beginning,
to believe that letting go can pave the
road back to the start...to allow your
heart a second chance.

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© Copyright 2014 by: gIrL
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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww this is quite a touching poem Meme, I enjoyed this. I felt like I was being told a little story of a relationship between 2 people, and how the relationship changed, but taught you lessons and helped you to move on, be stronger, let go, and accept new love again.

    When you mention looking back and feeling nothing, that is so powerful, it shows exactly how far you have moved on, I also like the mystery that the ex is perhaps not as moved on as you, perhaps he still clings or shows longing for the past again. But in the end you wish them the best, happiness and love.

    If I am really honest, I am not a fan of the title? I think there could be a much better choice, more fitting and eye catching. To me, an eeire just implies you have missed you a word, like an eerie love, eeire lesson, eerie closure, etc.

    Enjoyed this, nice to see your work again, I always enjoy reading your poems!