No One

by William Mae   Aug 20, 2014


Silence from a secret love,
Scabless deepening pain,
Suppressed hidden in a heart,
Where tears leave their stain.
No one can rise to cast away,
A forbidden love that scars,
Or shake the lonely lingering deed,
Birthed unknowing from afar.

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  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Totally agree with you Meena.
    The hidden pain is so well described in rhymes.No one can reach to understand this love between two souls.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh...this got me and got me really..really took me deep into those lines.

    No one can rise to cast away,
    A forbidden love that scars,
    Or shake the lonely lingering deed,
    Birthed unknowing from afar.

    ^^I like this stanza very much. Its touching and at the same time got me thinking about Romeo & Juliet....not sure why but it did, like so many failed love stories and hidden love.

    I liked this read very much and your choice of words and rhymes made this poem for me touching and beautiful.

    You wrote a poem after so long!!!! :) Happy to see this read..keep penning.

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