A song of love

by vengi57   Oct 20, 2014


The rhythm of keys swinging in your hand
the rhythm of your steps down the hallway floor
the rhythm of light shining from your eyes
tis a rhythm I've heard somewhere before

The beat of your heart beating fast
the beat of your fingers on the back of mine
the beat your breath keeps as you sleep
It all creates a melody divine

The music of your laughter
the music in your smile so bright
the music of your voice
lights up even the darkest night

The song of your life
the song of your heart so pure
the song of your beauty
I love as much as you, my dear.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Oh Jacquie, this poem is so incredible, the imagery and emotions that you've created and evoked with your words is so vivid and just, stunning!!! PS friend, you should really join the group chats once in a while, Andrew (masked metaphor) even wrote you a nice little welcome note on my request :-P

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I love the way you have written your poem. It's beautiful.
    Using the same words such as rhythm... Music... Beat. Song.... Adds to the beauty of the poem. It does make it look like a song.

    Well written.