Derelict Dreams

by cassie hughes   Nov 19, 2014


Come and walk within my walls
and listen whilst I whisper
in your ears.
The tales that I can tell to you
will bring back all your long
forgotten fears,
Of love and life and death and
all the harms folk do
behind closed doors.
Where no one sees their pain,
nor understands their not
so pleasant mores.
My tattered blinds have hid
a multitude of sins away
from prying eyes.
My ragged carpets muffled
sounds, my cellars hide a
myriad of lies.
The paper on the walls, once
coloured bright, with flowers,
fresh and new.
Is streaked and faded now,
with angry blossoms of
a darker hue.
The webs of spiders hang unmarked in all
the corners, waiting for
unwary prey.
And rats now scurry through dark rooms
no longer hiding from
the light of day.
So, if you dare, come in and see what
lives in darker minds than you
have ever thought.
But wary be of dwelling long upon them,
else you find your own
imagination caught.

Written for club prompt - write from the perspective of a house.

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  • 9 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    Great poem. Its interesting how everyone used the house as something depressing.

    I liked how the houses memories, time. Thats something interesting with houses. If they are not torn down, they show age, they become timeless..
    You see them, and just like a trees rings it shows exactly what happened at the time...

    The memories of this house seem to be... jaded... Like it wants something that it lost back.

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lovely work on this challenge, it was an interesting prompt and you created a great poem.

    I like the detail of the poem, and how you connected every line together to really paint that scene for the reader .

    good title choice too!

    But wary be of dwelling long upon them,
    else you find your own

    _ I do not think this flows well, and think it should be But be wary of....

    Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Only through darkness, can light shine. Within every scar, healing dwells.