I Guess I Miss Mori - Pantoumn

by Everlasting   Dec 21, 2014


Though in my computer, I type a story,
while I hear the clicking on my keyboard,
I keep thinking, "Where is Mori?
Would she be walking on a seashore?"

While I hear the clicking on my keyboard
I then wonder, but why?... why
would she be walking on a seashore?"
If Mori, she is spending Christmas with her family.

I then wonder, but why?... why
I keep thinking, "Where is Mori?
If Mori, she is spending Christmas with her family.
Though in my computer, I type a story.

Written by: L.L.

December 21, 2014

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The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8

Last stanza:

Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza

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  • 9 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Well I'm downright flattered Lucero! What I did in the winter was lay in bed and fall asleep, write but not go to the beach in fact I hate the beach lol but it was really adorable and it touched my heart to know someone would miss me! :) 5/5

    -Moria

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      You were missed by many Mori :P

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    We all miss Mori and yes even I wonder what she'd be doing right now!I'm sure she'll love this poem,and I love it too!

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Although I didn't understand what you are saying in this poem but yes..
    I miss mori chan too.. :'(

    But I smile thinking that she is happy wherever she is right now and soon she'll be back here too... :-)