Into The Stars

by Anonymous Me   Jan 7, 2015


A breath dies
As an eye opens
A heart stops
As a soul awakens

Who would've thought
You'd go so soon
Wings upon your back
As you fly to the moon

Across the universe
Into the stars
Even though you're gone
You live on in our hearts

I know you will be here always
And you will be missed
Memories we will carry
In our hearts and breast

Seasons will come
Seasons will go
I just wanted to let you know
We love you

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  • 9 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    I think...

    "Across the universe Into the stars"
    Or just "Into the stars"

    Would be a nice tile for this write???

    My favourite stanza...

    "Who would've thought
    You'd go so soon
    Wings upon your back
    As you fly to the moon"

    Has a soothing orah about it :)

    Very nice piece, heart felt

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I know you will be here always
    And you will be missed
    Memories we will carry
    In our hearts and breast

    - The only small part I didn't like about this poem was the word "breast" in this stanza, for me it just doesn't fit. I think it would sound better if you chose another word for it instead, but that is just my opinion.

    The rest of the poem I liked, especially in the opening stanza. I hope you pick a title for this write.

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