Into The Stars

@.@!!!

I think...

"Across the universe Into the stars"
Or just "Into the stars"

Would be a nice tile for this write???

My favourite stanza...

"Who would've thought
You'd go so soon
Wings upon your back
As you fly to the moon"

Has a soothing orah about it :)

Very nice piece, heart felt

5/5

I know you will be here always
And you will be missed
Memories we will carry
In our hearts and breast

- The only small part I didn't like about this poem was the word "breast" in this stanza, for me it just doesn't fit. I think it would sound better if you chose another word for it instead, but that is just my opinion.

The rest of the poem I liked, especially in the opening stanza. I hope you pick a title for this write.