Abandoned thoughts

by Everlasting   Feb 13, 2015


To mind comes
Abandoned thoughts
Those thoughts
Like homeless kiddos
Without a place to go
They seek a shelter
A place to call a home
Where food is abudant
And love is a garden
Where they can run
Like puppy pups
Amidst trees and flowers
To then rejoice

These thoughts
seek a place to grow
A roof to protect them
From hardships or storms
Where they can feel safe
To interact
With other thoughts
Where they can developed
Into adulthood
To be of help
To the entire world.

Dec, 2014

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  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I can somehow, somewhat, someway; relate this poem to the previous one I just reviewed, they both speak of the ones pondering in this life, thoughts of ours and of others, the peace seekers and answers seekers.

    In a very positive sense both your poems relate strongly.

    Calling the thoughts abandoned, maybe thoughts that are not shared with others, or thoughts that have not been soothed with actions, looking for a shelter, someone to share them with who could embrace them and take them into account.

    Loved the mention of food and love, I am not sure if this was intended or not, but the mention of food and love and thoughts is actually the down-cracking of the human system; soul, mind, and nurture..

    maybe it was your subconscious revealing these thoughts because you have them deep down within you as a humanist.

    Like puuppy pups...rejoice, the sense of happiness peace and comfort, such a beautiful scene!

    The 2nd part, just stressting again on your desire, on your need of finding a companion to your own thoughts, choosing the word "interact" showing that you are not necessarily looking for approval but for safety.

    And then your moral message at the end,
    what a beautiful poem.

    I hope you find your peace of soul and mind.

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