by cassie hughes May 16, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Failing heart |
by Ben Pickard
Really clever for such a short poem. Such depth in so little! |
by BlueJay
I love how different each of the pieces end up being. But yours was by far the one I identify with the most at the moment. The descriptions were amazing for having a restricted amount of words. The single line ending was great and the way you were able to share so much of yourself so deeply, so quickly, and so clearly. Wonderfully penned. |
by Baby Rainbow
This poem is so incredibly deep for being so short. Yu have managed to sum up the last minutes of someone's life in this powerful short verse, and use a language that is so captivating and unique. |