Always Wishing for More

by H. Elizabeth   Jun 8, 2015


I am going to sit here and
Cry into an empty bottle of
Vodka wishing for
More
And swallowing the pills
But I can never have
enough
To make me forget the
memories of you
And your cigarette stained lips
That whispered lies of
I love you
But I am the one who
Believed the lies and
It's my fault my heart ended up
In tons of
Tiny glass pieces
Scattered all around
this small town
And the vodka doesn't work
And the pills don't work
And nothing works
So I sit here
Still broken
Still crying
Still wanting more
Vodka more
Pills and more
Lies of
I love you.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Hannah's poem struck a huge chord within my soul on this lovely formatted and flowing poem.

    This poem is a side of how alcohol can destroy a life yes... but the numbing message is touched upon with elegance and grace.. Wonderful write!!

    • 8 years ago

      by H. Elizabeth

      Thank you so very much! I wish I was able to express m gratitude towards your kindness.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a heart breaking piece. Brilliantly written. Some great lines in there.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    You have way with words something that makes me wanna read more of your word even ones yet to be written.

    #silentreader.

  • 8 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Thank you to both of you. Both of yall have hit the meaning of this poem dead on. I really have no other words for yall because yall were so nice in yalls comments and that makes me feel overwhelmed with happiness so thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Powerful, emotional write. I like how honest you are in what you wish for, even though you know the pills, vodka, and whispers won't help. It makes me think of what we desire deep in our heart, that want to be purely loved without any setbacks, vs. the reality we have to remind ourselves of. The reality of moving on and realizing it wasn't true. But maybe it can be true with someone else. This piece really illustrates that feeling of being broken and feeling hopeless, which I hope you can conquer. I hope you can overcome this pain. Thinking of you.

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