Peters suicide(true story)

by nikki   Jul 7, 2004


Sitting here oblivious
i sang soft yet proud
i heard the bad news today
then my phone rang loud
as my father walked in the door
he said I have something horrible that you must hear
I'm afraid Hannah's father
who you hold so dear
has lost his life
its so hard to say
I'm sorry Nikki
it happened this Thursday
as i crashed to the floor
barely able to comprehend
he picked up my phone
what the message said
I didn't understand
it was my best friend
lost in her own mind
as she knew too that
the path to death he did find
i cried so hard
i ran out of tears
the suicide of a man
who showed no fears
happiness he showed us
though inside, depressed
tragedy had occurred
for his mind was messed
one of my closest friends
left only a shell
as her father had left her
and his cold dead body had fell

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  • 19 years ago

    by stephalee

    wow people really dont know that when they commit suicide how much it hurts people around them good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    babe......its beautiful i know how much it hurt as i sat there and cried with u through the funeral and many other days....i couldnt of expressed that day any better myself......so good babe luv ya hang in there
    luv ur best friend jessycar xoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by CC

    hey aww thats sad but very well written poem... keep writing and im here for u when your not there for yourself girl... think about it please..