by Dancing Rivers Jul 28, 2015
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Round and round and around, |
by DarkLight
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I like this one. it has a sense of humor. The message is clear and in simple language. The wording felt right, the rhyme was in balance. |
by Ben Pickard
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Wonderful, prickly write, Hazel. Well executed. |
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Hehe, prickly, what a colourful way to describe it :) thanks ben |