by Darren Aug 6, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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It ignored me |
by Sunshine
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I Flicked an Ant* |
by Z
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This poem is amazing. :). The ending has a beautiful twist as well. It does well to stand out on its own. 5/5 |
by WW
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Awesome! 5/5 |
by Darren
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Thanks WW |
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Contrariwise to all expectation, that ant might come back to bite you in the butt. |
by Darren
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True Larry, luckily only red ants bite over here and they are quite rare these days. thanks for reading. |
by Ben Pickard
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Indeed - and they are so much stronger and better than us in almost every way, relatively! Excellent piece. |
by Darren
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Thanks again Ben |