Untitled: Line messaging Form

by Everlasting   Sep 18, 2015


I, watched grown men and women, live alone.
Their families forgot them, threw them on the streets
as if they were trash. No wonder,
their heart grew weary in loneliness

Mom talked to them. Gave them food
whenever she could. The old men and women
came to visit, smiled, and looked happy.
Though, when they were lonely, their heart was cold
but in company, it grew fonder

All it took for the old men and women
was a sign of care from someone else, to live life
With love and gratitude.

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Message

their heart grew weary in loneliness
but in company, it grew fonder
with love and gratitude

Written August 2014

Lucero L.

Line Messaging

Line Messaging is a poetry form created by Angel Favazza is a poetic form wherein the poet utilizes the last line of each stanza to help represent an overall idea. So if the last line of each stanza is read together (separately from the poem) it will have an independent message or be a poem all on its own.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes it is a heart warming write and sometimes it is the best cure for loneliness- a little bit of care and thought...nicely done with the form dear!