by Larry Chamberlin & Mr. Darcy Oct 29, 2015
category :
Life, society /
other
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Sorcerous arcs slashed the vast night |
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Nice work Larry! |
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Thanks, Peter, but half of the praise needs to go to Michael. |
by Ben Pickard
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Well done, Gentlemen, this is a fantastic RHYMING poem, lol. I never thought I'd see the day from two of the best non-rhyming poets on this site! |
by Cindy
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Good job on your collaboration. Tells a wonderful story. Keeps the reader engrossed from beginning to end. |
by Mr. Darcy
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Hello Larry, |
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It appears we both learned, Michael. I loved that you could take my corny connections between characters and give them a logical reworking that also remained clear for the reader. Also, your insistence on tragedy at the outset & middle made the poem. |